I've been pondering how to depict the final outcome. All my skills and agility felt weighed down; every word was an arduous task but filled with deep intent. It felt like a heavy burdened trek, yet there was an indomitable drive within me, pushing forward regardless of any obstacles.,That would be domineering and truly manly because we are all men, right A fierce life doesn't need to be complicated.,So, I made a few small tweaks to polish up the ending; these changes may not be significant in the grand scheme of things, but they should make for a more satisfying conclusion.。